Hey everybody, after months of intermittent writer's block and lack of time I finally finished with this poem.

I based this poem on the AWESOME picture [link] by this AWESOME artist [link], who was in turn commissioned and inspired by dialogue written by [link]. In this world, Luna/Nightmare Moon was unknowingly with foal when she was banished by the Elements of Harmony, and as a result of that ignorance tragedy ensues.

Not completely satisfied with how this turned out, but I can't find a way to make any closer to what I want. Even so, pleased with the overall result

Any feedback, critiques, etc would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!

My Little Pony, Luna, Nightmare Moon and Celestia are the property of Hasbro and Lauren Faust.